For the Digipak the images used were seen as a bit dull, lacking impact and appeared washed out. This is fair comment, as they don't stand out and are quite boring. They possibly appear washed out because of they heavy rain at the time. Also it would be better to move the legal information from the inside left panel to the back cover, to make it look more authentic and credible. Similarly I need to add a catalogue number to enhance the albums athenticity. Additionally it would look better if the barcode and record company logo, were moved to the side or made to the same size. This is because at the moment they look a bit out of place, as well as cheap because of their differing size.Finally the font needs altering because like the above items, it seems out of place and doesn't fit in with the style of iamges used.
The main point of feedback for the Poster was that it was severely lacking in any impact, mainly contributed to by the dull image, which taken on the same day appears boring and washed out. It also lacks information because their is no release date for the album, just a random quote in support of the album. Therefore as well as the release date, perhaps a website or tour dates could be added to further add information, whilst increasing the posters credibility.
Overall I need to improve the impact of both my digipak and poster, by improving the images used and the fonts chosen. This will make them stand out more and look more professional, which could also be contributed to by using an official record company logo, as opposed to designing one myself, that doesn't look credible.
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